Cara's Dialogue for the Sequel to Attack the Block

The dialogue in my sequel moves the story forward as it uses some elements from the first Attack the Block movie and this has been processed and progressed into something more mature than what the previous film was. Moses has now grown up and become a fatherly figure to two of the boys in the gang and this shows how the typical youth stereotypes can be challenged and how we contradict the way in which society thinks of youths. This evidently shows that it links with my macro study.

It still shows the relationship Moses has with the people he has been brought up with, even after being in prison for 5+ years.

To improve this I will need to look at the dialect in which the group use: Chav', gang-like, so I can get the story and dialogue rolling more freely into the next scene.